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@@ -45,24 +45,26 @@ governments access to unencrypted Internet communications so that
 suspicious activity can be flagged and investigated in order to
 prevent a terror attack or in order to better respond in the case of
 an attack. Graham describes the extensive use of end to end encryption
-used by terrorists in order to avoid interception by the autorities.
+used by terrorists in order to avoid interception by the authorities.
 Due to U.S. usage of intercepted communications to uncover and prevent
 a number of al-Qa'ida plots, the terrorist organisation and other
 terrorist groups have increasingly used encrypted communications (read
 citation from Graham). An significant factor is the use of
 non-mainstreams software in early use of encryption by terrorists,
-including a program that built a rapper around the popular, secure,
+including a program that built a wrapper around the popular, secure,
 and open source PGP called \fIMujahedeen secrets\fR. Although now
 terrorists and criminals use widely available, popular, and
 user-friendly software such as the Tails operating system or Telegram
-(Graham citation 28), Messaging
-technologies and their support for `end-to-end encryption' is a
-particularly significant issue. Introduction of end-to-end encryption
-being introduced by large companies such as Facebook has raised
-concern {conversation facebook} over the potential for usage by
-criminals and a lack of ability for Facebook or law enforcement to
-obtain conversation between criminals which may be vital in an
-investigation. 
+(Graham citation 28), terrorists organisations have shown an ability
+to make use of more obscure and complicated systems, as well as use
+publicly available source code in order to construct software for
+operatives to use. Messaging technologies and their support for
+`end-to-end encryption' is a particularly significant issue.
+Introduction of end-to-end encryption being introduced by large
+companies such as Facebook has raised concern {conversation facebook}
+over the potential for usage by criminals and a lack of ability for
+Facebook or law enforcement to obtain conversation between criminals
+which may be vital in an investigation. 
 
 Concerns exist with digital technologies on at a hardware level. The
 Intel Management Engine that exists {Intel Management}