Continuing with introduction.

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@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ generally, governments have often engaged in signals intelligence
 (SIGINT) such as phone line tapping. Modern SIGINT initiatives have
 become incredibly complex and sophisticated and have grown greatly as
 popular adoption of technology has grown. Part of government interest
-in SIGINT is a direct response to percieved threads, such as the
+in SIGINT is a direct response to perceived threads, such as the
 PATRIOT Act in the US which followed the 2001 terrorist attacks with
 the objective of strengthening national security (cite). Later, the
 FISA Amendments Act of 2008  further increased increased the powers of
@@ -49,16 +49,16 @@ US {guardian greenwald verizon}{guardian NSA roberts}{times savage
 to respond to encryption and other technological developments with the
 primary interest of overcoming it in order to prevent terror and
 crime. These measures have, however, had arguably limited
-efffectiveness and have violated the privacy of individuals who are
-not suspected of being a threat to national security. The way we
-respond to encryption as a society will clearly be significant, and
-the success of government responses to encryption in relation to
-issues such as terror and crime are rather significant. A failure of
-effective response could allow terrorism to occur in ways previously
-unseen, however an overreaction threatens people's civil liberties and
-could easily be exploited for reasons other than prevention of crime
-and terror. The successes and failures of government responses can be
-judged in various ways.
+effectiveness and have violated the privacy of individuals who are
+not suspected of being a threat to national security. Responses to
+encryption domestically and internationally will have significant
+consequences, given the potential importance of the information being
+communicated. Successful SIGINT and cryptanalysis by government
+agencies can successfully respond to modern threats of crime and
+terror. A failure of responsible governance, however may not only
+threaten the privacy of individuals unnecessarily, but also fail to
+respond to the ways in which criminals and terrorists are using
+encryption existing thereby only as a tool of authoritarian control.
 
 An argument is often made against allowing widespread use of
 encryption and generally against widespread effective operations
@@ -304,6 +304,7 @@ such as keys (research, cite).
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 Intro
     Foreign Intelligence Surveillance Act of 1978 Amendments Act of 2008
+	USA FREEDOM Act (2015)(HR 2048)
 
 Cryptography
     https://wikiless.org/wiki/Kerckhoffs%27s_principle?lang=en
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+++ b/refer
@@ -120,6 +120,8 @@
 %O https://www.theguardian.com/world/2013/jun/06/obama-administration-nsa-verizon-records
 (Accessed 17th February 2022)
 
+-- lawmaking
+
 %T US House passes bill to boost chip manufacturing and R&D
 %J The Register
 %D Feb 2022