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@@ -367,12 +367,22 @@ The executive summary to the 9/11 Commission Report {#9/11 commission
 report} describes the September 2001 terrorist attacks as 'a shock,
 not a surprise'. In a similar light, the release of information
 relating to mass surveillance and mishandling of data such as the 2013
-Edward Snowden releases and the 2018 Facebook-Cambridge Analytica
-scandal ought to also be potentially considered a shock, not a
-surprise given the level of data that both governments and private
-organisations have access to and responsibility for. Encryption
-enables people to trust that their data that they wish to be private
-truly is and allows 
+Edward Snowden releases ought to also be potentially considered a
+shock, not a surprise given the level of data that both governments
+and private organisations have access to and responsibility for.
+Encryption enables people to trust that their data that they wish to
+be private truly is and allows companies to handle communications
+such as e-mails without having to consider secure storage or giving
+data to law enforcement due to the fact the company itself is unable
+to read the data if it is end-to-end encrypted. The free market
+arguably has moved itself towards encrypted standards. Open source
+initiatives have pioneered free implementations of secure
+cryptographic standards, allowing any user to use these tools directly
+in order to send information, as occurs with the popular PGP
+implementation GPG. Additionaly the open implementation of
+cryptographic tools enables developers to integrate secure versions of
+these tools into new programs, allowing for the easy development of
+programs that allow encrypted communications.
 
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