Intel Management Engine/hardware. 1200 words.

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@@ -117,10 +117,13 @@ cannot prevent the existence of software that enables encryption which
 is open source and reproducible internationally. Just as media privacy
 through torrents and access to hidden services over tor are possible
 without significant regulation, regulation of encryption may prove
-impossible.
-
-Concerns exist with digital technologies on at a hardware level. The
-Intel Management Engine that exists {Intel Management}
+impossible. An arguably useful tool to the authorities does exist in
+the hardware and infrastructure that users of the internet rely on.
+Firstly, the vast majority (cite) of users in the forseeable future
+will continue to use the highly popular CPUs designed by Intel. 
+Concerns have already been expressed {Intel Management} with regard to
+the Intel Management Engine that exists on modern processors produced
+by Intel.
 
 {firewall}