From 0fbb3213e0121efb4d11a416b962aaf96ae82bc0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mohit Agarwal <mohit.agarwal@sky.com>
Date: Tue, 7 Sep 2021 23:13:30 +0100
Subject: Started rewriting. 140 words.

---
 paper.md        | 10 ++++++++++
 reference.bib   | 25 +++++++++++++++++++++++++
 socialmedia.bib |  1 -
 3 files changed, 35 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/paper.md b/paper.md
index 28dcd67..66c1a4b 100644
--- a/paper.md
+++ b/paper.md
@@ -12,5 +12,15 @@ nocite: '@*'
 <!-- Should we rethink the nature and limits of freedom of speech in
 the internet age? -->
 
+In modern society usage of the internet is clearly widespread and is
+noticeably an incredibly significant in our world today and will
+continue to be so [@stats;@stats-population;@stats-access]. The nature
+of the internet raises many questions in relation to our
+understanding of freedom of speech and allows the spread of
+information in a way that was once impossible. The significance and
+prevalence of the internet both now and in the foreseeable future,
+particularly given its popularity with young people means that we must
+consider the internet's relation to freedom of speech and how we
+should, or rather shouldn't attempt to act on it.
 
 # References and bibliography
diff --git a/reference.bib b/reference.bib
index f917fae..20b6c30 100644
--- a/reference.bib
+++ b/reference.bib
@@ -52,3 +52,28 @@ InCollection{england-wales-crime,
     journal = "Cato Institute",
     url = "https://www.cato.org/policy-analysis/alcohol-prohibition-was-failure"
 }
+@article{stats-population,
+    title = "Global digital population as of January 2021",
+    author = "Joseph Johnson",
+    year = "2021",
+    journal = "Statista",
+    url = "https://www.statista.com/statistics/617136/digital-population-worldwide/"
+}
+@article{stats-access,
+    title = "Americans’ Internet Access: 2000-2015",
+    author = "Andrew Perrin and Maeve Duggan",
+    journal = "Pew Research Center",
+    year = "2015",
+    url = "https://www.pewresearch.org/internet/2015/06/26/americans-internet-access-2000-2015/"
+}
+@InCollection{sep-freedom-speech,
+	author       =	{van Mill, David},
+	title        =	{{Freedom of Speech}},
+	booktitle    =	{The {Stanford} Encyclopedia of Philosophy},
+	editor       =	{Edward N. Zalta},
+	howpublished =	{\url{https://plato.stanford.edu/archives/spr2021/entries/freedom-speech/}},
+	year         =	{2021},
+	edition      =	{{S}pring 2021},
+	publisher    =	{Metaphysics Research Lab, Stanford University}
+}
+
diff --git a/socialmedia.bib b/socialmedia.bib
index f44af20..ff77d27 100644
--- a/socialmedia.bib
+++ b/socialmedia.bib
@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
-
 @article{ieee-freedom,
     title = "Social Media Won't Free Us",
     year = "2017",
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